Oh, Brother

By Betty K., Nebraska

2026 Write Now Winner - Grades 3 & 4


As I was listening to Kelly’s presentation, I saw Whitney, my girlfriend, walking in the room with a guy. They sat down, and she leaned on him.  

Why is Whitney doing that? And it popped into my head: I was dumped. 

I shot up out of my seat.

“Whitney, what are you doing?” I screamed. 

The room became silent. Everyone stared at me.

After school, Whitney texted me to meet her at George Calvin Park at 9:00. When I arrived, Whitney stood next to the guy.

“I’d like you to meet my brother.” 

Guess I’m really getting dumped now. 

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